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Why?

January 31st, 2007 by alexh

Why can’t you see me?

This tortured being behind the mask

Where lights fades to black

You find me pouring crimson betrayal

Why don’t they understand?

These pitiful pretenders

Underestimating the power

Disbelief leading to my end

Why won’t they listen?

Arrogance blinding

Opinions lashing

Never fully understanding

Why should they stop?

Suffocating me in their lies

Cutting me into pieces

I cry for them all

Why wont somebody tell me I’m fine?

I open my eyes to find emptiness

Repulsed by my blood

They dissolve into the shadows of my mind

Why should I care?

They watch as I lay dying

Saving the last breath for final word

A whisper of a song once forgotten

Why?

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  1.   fraser said,

    on February 12th, 2007 at 8:25 pm

    this is a really cool poem… my favourite lines were:
    Arrogance blinding

    Opinions lashing

    Never fully understanding

    Why should they stop?

    all in all… pretty cool

    - FЯASЭЯ

  2.   Hannah said,

    on February 21st, 2007 at 5:33 pm

    hey Alex,
    well i love your poem i find it relates in a way to you and in a different way to me…. it reminds me of how i once was in a figurative way…..nice job
    hannahXxOo

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